A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to ur friend and in your letter: . Give details of course you took at university . Explain why you recommend the university . Give some advice about how to apply.
Dear Nina,
I am very
preasure
your Correct your spelling
pleasure
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in my Replace the word
thinking
course
because your think
is so important Replace the word
thinking
for
me.
In my opinion, Change preposition
to
this
course
excel
other Change the verb form
excels
course
. I know other courses so
popular but they have Add a missing verb
are so
a
too Correct article usage
apply
much
people Correct quantifier usage
many
than
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apply
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who
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about your
your
. Correct pronoun usage
you
This
is awful because the course
expensive.
My Add a verb
course is
course was
course
cheaper other
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than other
course
and the Fix the agreement mistake
courses
course
have
a good Correct subject-verb agreement
has
teacher
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they have a
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apply
one person
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one-person
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but the section Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
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lesson
very
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was very
different
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a different
language
. My course
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was onlt
onlt
twice a week and Correct your spelling
only
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in totaly
totaly
we attended four hours a week. If you have a question, Correct your spelling
total
teacher
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the teacher
finish
the Correct subject-verb agreement
finishes
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you should be do
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be doing
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for all
teacher
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teachers
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language
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speak
language
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apply
teacher
talk
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speak
english
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English
native
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their native
language
the course
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speak
english
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situation was
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English
language
.
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the language
a language
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that
course
only applies to
online and you pay Change preposition
apply
the
online. Correct article usage
apply
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do not have a Correct your spelling
They
face to face
application and the Add a hyphen
face-to-face
all
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apply
english
. If you need Change the capitalization
English
to
help you should Change preposition
apply
be call
me.
Best regardsChange the verb form
call
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coherence cohesion
Try to organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea. This will make it easier for your friend to follow your thoughts.
task achievement
Ensure that all parts of the task prompt are explicitly and fully addressed. This will help you achieve a higher score for task response.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. Remember, you are writing to a friend, so a friendly and approachable tone is important.
coherence cohesion
You included a personalized greeting and closing, which adds a friendly touch.
task achievement
You explained the benefits of the course you took, which helps your friend understand why it's a good choice.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite