Buying tickets on the internet such as books, air tickets, and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this outweigh the disadvantage
Nowadays,
people
are buying their booklets, flight tickets
and groceries on internet
and it is getting more viral. There are some benefits like user friendly Add an article
the internet
in
booking options and Change preposition
apply
also
tickets
can download
easily, Wrong verb form
be downloaded
as well as
, we discuss the demerits also
.
To begin
with, people
can purchase their tickets
in
online and it is really useful. At the same time, they can cancel their Change preposition
apply
tickets
before the
arrival but the transport team will deduct some charges. Change the word
their
Also
Add a comma
Also,
tickets
are really in
safe, we can show Change preposition
apply
it
on our mobile. Correct pronoun usage
them
Additionally
, we can check the tickets
availability at any location. Change noun form
ticket's
tickets'
For instance
, we can able to take some measures like Kerala to Delhi seats
availability, distance, hours of travel, time to book, waiting or conformed about those details will shows.
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seat
On the other hand
, people
must aware
of the Add a missing verb
be aware
tickets
booking because of Fix the agreement mistake
ticket
scam
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scams
in
online. Change preposition
apply
Especially
, fake websites and fake applications of ticket raising Rephrase
In particular
is
more dangerous. Change the verb form
are
Also
groceries are more popular than others. Add a comma
Also,
While
booking to purchase groceries has not been the right thing all the time due to
scam
in online Fix the agreement mistake
scams
purchase
. Considering Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
this
we can go with money and can do shopping. So these are the demerits which is
having online payments.
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are
To conclude
, people
buying their tickets
or products through the internet there are some merits like cancelling, digital tickets
and check
the status of Wrong verb form
checking
transports
. Fix the agreement mistake
transport
Also
, demerits like fake websites and fake apps to scam people
compare
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compared
to
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apply
both
the Correct pronoun usage
apply
advantage
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advantages
is
not outweigh the disadvantages.Verb problem
do
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coherence cohesion
Try to present a clearer logic by structuring your arguments more distinctly. For instance, begin each new point with a clear topic sentence.
task achievement
Ensure your introduction adequately paraphrases the question and presents a clear thesis statement on whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
task achievement
Improve your examples by using more specific and detailed descriptions that directly support your points.
coherence cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are present, creating a complete essay structure.
task achievement
You have touched on both advantages and disadvantages within the topic.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...