The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
gives
information about the online shopping experience Change the verb form
give
sales
in Canada for retail sectors between 2005 and 2010 .
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that at the beginning of the period, electronics and home
furnishings
were the most significant. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
video
games
and food
were the least significant. In comparison, at the end
of the period, video
games
and home
furnishings
made the lowest segments.additionally
, applications and food
made the highest levels of the
online shopping .
Commerce with the Correct article usage
apply
year
2005 , pretty obvious electronics and appliances were the most significant part of the
online shopping Correct article usage
apply
sales
accounted
for 35 %. Wrong verb form
accounting
Video
games
was
the least preferred in the Change the verb form
were
year
2005 made
up the smallest segment 18% . Wrong verb form
making
Food
and beverage were
had a Unnecessary verb
apply
slightly
Change the adverb
slight
growths
of 22% . Fix the agreement mistake
growth
Home
furnishings
to a quarter .
In the year
2010 , food
and beverage made up the biggest parts of the online shopping sales
32% . In contrast
, home
furnishings
was the smallest part of the chart for sales
of 15% . Electronic and appliances had a slight drop of 30%. Video
games
was lagest
to 23 in the Correct your spelling
largest
year
2010 .Submitted by a.almakmari93 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, home, furnishings, video, games, food, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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