The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014
The line graph clearly delineates the count of
books
read by men
and women
at Burnaby Public Library over a period from 2011 to 2014.
Overall
, women
read more books
throughout the period except for 2013 when the number attributed to men
. Whereas
, beginning in 2013, the total number of books
read by males indicated a consistent upward trend, overtaking the sum for females which encountered a dramatic decline.
To begin
, in 2011, women
outpaced men
by approximately 2000 books
, with men
and women
reading 3000 and 5000 books
respectively at Burnaby Public Library.The ensuing years saw the figures for women
climb steadily. Subsequently
, the data for females had a steady increase ,peaking in 2013 at 10,000 books
doubling the initial count.However
, there was a sharp drop in the number of statements read by women
to 8000 in 2014.
Additionally
, the male reading figures were recorded at 3000 in 2011 with a slight increase of 1000 books
. Furthermore
, the subsequent three years showed a considerable rise up to 14,000 books
by 2014. In contrast
, the figure for men
started surpassing the data for women
which achieved the leading position.Submitted by chunyanh502 on
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