The chart below shows tha value of one country's exports in various catagories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catagory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relavant.

The chart below shows tha value of one country's exports in various catagories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catagory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
export
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earnings of a country in five categories in 2015 and 2016,
while
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the table highlights the percentage changes for each
category
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over the same period.
Overall
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,
export
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revenues increased in most categories, with textiles experiencing the most significant growth.
Conversely
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, gems and
jewelry
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jewellery
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were the only
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category
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categories
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to decline. Petroleum products remained the highest contributor to
export
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earnings in both years. Petroleum products generated $61
billion
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in 2015, rising slightly by 3% to $63
billion
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in 2016.
Similarly
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, engineered goods, the second-largest
export
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, increased by 8.5%, from $58
billion
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to $61
billion
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. Agricultural products experienced minimal growth, climbing just 0.81%, from $31
billion
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to $32
billion
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.
In contrast
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, gems and
jewelry
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jewellery
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were the only
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category
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categories
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to decline, falling by 5.18% from $43
billion
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to $40
billion
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. Notably, textiles saw a dramatic surge of 15.24%, rising from $25
billion
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to over $30
billion
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, making it the fastest-growing
export
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category
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. In summary,
while
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most exports grew modestly, textiles displayed exceptional growth,
whereas
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gems and
jewelry
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jewellery
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declined, marking a contrasting trend.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, category, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export categories
  • percentage change
  • value
  • economic indicators
  • manufactured goods
  • commodities
  • trade balance
  • fluctuations
  • economic conditions
  • domestic production
  • trade policies
  • year-over-year comparison
  • significant increase/decrease
  • trends
  • global market
  • comparison
  • economic implications
  • patterns
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