The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the variation in the proportion of households owning cars in a specific European country from 1971 to 2001.
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, it can be seen that the majority of the population did not have cars in the first ten years
while
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that of owning one
car
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dominated in the
last
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period. Starting at around half of the total households, the figure for no
car
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experienced a decline from 1971 to 1981, reaching over 40% before remaining stable in the
last
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two point years (30%). During the same period, the
percentages
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percentage
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of families in one European country who have
single
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a single
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car
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also
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recorded an upward trend from 35% in 1971 to
nearly20
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nearly 20
% in 1991 whilst after that
this
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number skyrocketed to 42%, showing the largest figure among all categories in 2001.
On the other hand
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, the remaining category, which
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double
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car
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cars
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was quite volatile. In 1997,
this
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rate became the smallest figure before climbing
at
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to
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29% in the next ten years.
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,
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dropped to 21% and
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rebounded
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again in 2001, accounting
the
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for the
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same rate with no
car
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ownership (30%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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