The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart depicts the shift in total
car
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ownership among households in a specific European country between 1971 and 2001.
Overall
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, the majority of households did not own cars , making up the highest percentage in the first 20 years.
However
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, in the
last
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period, the percentage of
family
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families
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with
one
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car
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dominated
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was
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higher than
two
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the two
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other categories. Starting at almost half of the total household population in
one
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country, the figure for "no
car
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" experienced a decline over 20 periods, reaching 30% of the total family. During the same time, the rate of families with
one
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car
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also
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shared a similar trend to those who
without
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were without
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cars, starting from around 35% to just under 20% in 1991.
However
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, in 2001,
this
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share was skyrocketing to over 40% for single-
car
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ownerships, showing the largest rate
at the end
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of the period. The figure for the remaining
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one
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apply
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category,
on the other hand
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, was quite volatile over all the years. Becoming the smallest number in the first year, the rate of two-
car
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ownership climbed to almost 30% in 1981 before dropping and
then
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rebounding again, reaching a final value of 32% in 2001.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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