The line graph below shows who Americans spend their time with, by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates who residents in the United States rather be in their free
time
by age. Overall
, it is noticeable that depending on the moment of their lives.
Taking a closer look at the illustration it is crystal clear that being alone is how Americans spend most of their time
along their lifespan, from 3 hours
when they are born to more than 8 when they finally
arrive. It is curious because family and friends appear in a child's life for 5 and 1:30 hours
respectively, spending way more time
than when they grow up. Also
, it is appreciated that around 15 years is where the peak of mates time
is reached, 2h . Later on, when adolescence is finished, from 20 to 60 years, an average of 3 hours
are spent with coworkers, then
retirement arrives and people do not spend more time
with them. Moreover
, between 25 to 30 years, the amount of hours
dedicated to partners and children is the same, 3h; however
, moments spent with juveniles increase touching the vertex at their thirties and maintain a mean of 5h until they are 40. Furthermore
, between 60 to the end, individuals spend more time
with their partners, with a maximum of 5 hours
.
To summarize, youth and the elderly spend their time
differently.Submitted by lusitusi:)
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