The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selectting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The process diagram describes the production of energy from a specific type of coal.

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, electricity production involves several stages from taking the raw material out of the mines, processing it until is viable for use and later heating it until the gas is produced and,

at the end

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, electricity is made and sent to users.

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, coal is extracted from the mine and taken to the crushed in order to break it into smaller pieces. Once the size of the mineral is acceptable is transported by a truck to the gasifier centre, where heat is applied in order to produce vapour used in the industry. After arriving at the company, a cooling system is used to refrigerate, and the waste of heat is eliminated;

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the rest of the product continues to the following step.

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the vapour is cleaned in another building and taken to the gas power plant where electricity is

finally

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produced and ready to use by consumers; there is

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an excess of heat removed.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

thermal coal
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combustion
heat energy
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