the pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

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men

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choose

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in Great Britain in 1992.

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female employees mostly preferred non-manual work,

however

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employment pattern of

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showed that manual and non-manual

labours

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are almost equal. The vast majority of females worked

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clerical and related positions in comparison with the males. The figures were 31 per

cent

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and six per

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respectively.

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, over one in three of

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was managerial and professional,

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female managers number showed 29%. The difference between these indicators was not so great. The craft and similar assignments were chosen by about a quarter of

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contrast

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only three per

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of females preferred crafts. General labourers and other non-manual

employments

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percentages barely had distinctions between each other.

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, the divergence in other manuals between women and

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was only 1 per

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.