The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The

two

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maps describe the blueprint of an industrial site in

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the

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present year and its future developmental plans which

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are

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situated in the Norbiton.

Overall

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Norbiton

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the Norbiton

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industrial

area

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will be replaced by

housings

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housing

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along with

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modern facilities which

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are

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presently occupied by the factories.

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, from south to north a new expressway will be formed with

two

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roundabouts where a river will split into

two

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opposite directions. Even a huge

area

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of farmland will be given a half place in the north-east. There will be no change in the

area

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of town on the left. In the north, a new housing will be built behind a new avenue . An

area

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on the left of

central

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the central

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roundabout will be surrounded by three housings near a river in the

north-west

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northwest

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which is now surrounded

with

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factories.

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, the areas

nearby

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near

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two

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roundabouts on

left

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the left

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and right will be taken place by shops and medical

centre

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centres

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respectively. In the east , a main lane from a central road will have more

housings

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housing

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which

further

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leads into an

area

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for

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apply

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ground. The lane ends

into

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area

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for a school

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Dec 13, 2024

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

189 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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