The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
two
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maps describe the blueprint of an industrial site in
a
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present year and its future developmental plans which
is
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situated in the Norbiton.
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,
Norbiton
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the Norbiton
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industrial
area
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will be replaced by
housings
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housing
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along with
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modern facilities which
is
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presently occupied by the factories.
Firstly
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, from south to north a new expressway will be formed with
two
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roundabouts where a river will split into
two
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opposite directions. Even a huge
area
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of farmland will be given a half place in the north-east. There will be no change in the
area
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of town on the left. In the north, a new housing will be built behind a new avenue . An
area
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on the left of
central
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the central
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roundabout will be surrounded by three housings near a river in the
north-west
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northwest
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which is now surrounded
with
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by
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factories.
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, the areas
nearby
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near
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two
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roundabouts on
left
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the left
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and right will be taken place by shops and medical
centre
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centres
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respectively. In the east , a main lane from a central road will have more
housings
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housing
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which
further
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leads into an
area
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for
a
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apply
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ground. The lane ends
into
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in
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an
area
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for a school
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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