The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
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The diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the production of biofuels and the way in which the
ethanol
used
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to
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to make
fuel
for vehicles.
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,
the
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ethanol
pass
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through four stages before being ready for use as
fuel
.
While
the process of making
ethanol
uses a number of tools, the production of
ethanol
is simple, the production of biofuels started with
the
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pre-processing and processing.
In the
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first stage of making biofuels is called pre-processing, with
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sunlight and carbon dioxide
makes
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all the
plants
and trees growing
in
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the earth.
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plants
and trees are harvested with motorcycles machines
with
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farmers.
Next,
the
woods
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and
plants
are crushed using a crusher machine. The resulting crushed wood have content is cellulose,
this
content order to processing with another chemistry content in the lab into the sugars. After that, the product
are
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added
the
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microbes and resulting the
ethanol
. The final product is ready to be used as
fuel
for vehicles,
such
as planes, trucks, and cars.
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fuel
was
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used by the vehicle will
results
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the carbon dioxide which continually rotates to
produces
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the
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trees and
plants
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, fuel, plants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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