The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
The diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the production of biofuels and the way in which the
ethanol
used
Add a missing verb
is used
to
to make Change preposition
apply
fuel
for vehicles.
Overall
, the
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apply
ethanol
pass
through four stages before being ready for use as Correct subject-verb agreement
passes
fuel
. While
the process of making ethanol
uses a number of tools, the production of ethanol
is simple, the production of biofuels started with the
pre-processing and processing.
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apply
In the
first stage of making biofuels is called pre-processing, with Change preposition
The
the
sunlight and carbon dioxide Correct article usage
apply
makes
all the Wrong verb form
making
plants
and trees growing in
the earth. Change preposition
on
This
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These
plants
and trees are harvested with motorcycles machines with
farmers. Change preposition
by
Next,
the woods
and Fix the agreement mistake
wood
plants
are crushed using a crusher machine.
The resulting crushed wood have content is cellulose, this
content order to processing with another chemistry content in the lab into the sugars. After that, the product are
added Change the verb form
is
the
microbes and resulting the Change preposition
to the
ethanol
. The final product is ready to be used as fuel
for vehicles, such
as planes, trucks, and cars. These all
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All the
fuel
was
used by the vehicle will Unnecessary verb
apply
results
the carbon dioxide which continually rotates to Change the verb form
result
produces
Wrong verb form
produce
the
trees and Correct article usage
apply
plants
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, fuel, plants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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