Some people think having more TV channels is good because they will have more choices. While other people think too many TV channels only lead to a lot of poor-quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
For some people, the more
TV
channels
they have, the bigger number
of choices they can watch. Correct article usage
the number
However
, some people believe that abundant TV
channels
will lead to massive poor
Add a hyphen
poor-quality
quality
TV
programs
. Even though I inclined
to Add a missing verb
am inclined
small
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a small
number
yet high
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high-quality
quality
of
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apply
TV
channels
, I will explore both arguments in this
essay.
To commence with, it is true that many TV
channels
lead to a lot of choices since every TV
station will try to stand out among others by making unique TV
programs
. Especially because they aim to a specific audience. For example
, Disney Channel who
targets children, only broadcast cartoon movies. Correct pronoun usage
which
While
FOX and CNN focus on middle class
adults who have Add a hyphen
middle-class
interests
in current affairs.
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interest
On the other hand
, in order to fill time slots and to
attract advertisements, Fix the infinitive
apply
TV
stations tend to make as many programs
as they can. It is true that sometimes they put aside quality
in order to meet quantity. For example
, it is hard for TV
producers to always have high qualities
sources to talk in Correct your spelling
high-quality
talkshows
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talk shows
while
the sessions have been scheduled. Hence
, they tend to take mediocre people to speak who can easily give some misleading informations
.
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information
pieces of information
To conclude
, there are two groups of audiences regarding number
of Change the article
a number
the number
TV
channels
based on preferences on wide
range of program options or Add an article
a wide
quality
of the programs
. I inclined
to Add a missing verb
am inclined
low
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low-number
number
, high
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high-quality
quality
programs
since I do not have a lot of time to watch TV
. However
, I hope in the future TV
stations will improve substantially.Submitted by edna.c.pattisina on
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