The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two diagrams illustrate how the surroundings of the City Hospital area had changed over the period of 3 years from 2007 to 2010.

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significant alterations

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been made to the allocation of roads and

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in the area. Looking first

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the

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sections, we can see that in the previous

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plan, there were merely two roads to the south of the hospital, with Hospital

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towards

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and City

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leading from west to east.

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, in 2010, two roundabouts were added on

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Hospital

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way to the new bus station. Turning to the transportation parts,

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six bus stops along each side of Hospital

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catered to passengers had noticeably no longer existed, a bus station was built to the west of Hospital

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. The east extension

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included a massive public parking space, which connected to the medical area. On the southeast side of the city hospital, the original parking lot for both staff and the public had made way for a staff-only car park , which was adjacent to Hospital

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