The chart shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The chart compares what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their degree course.the table compares the salaries of anthropologists in
work
after 5 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
most
students
worked in full-time
work
,
whereas
the most highly paid type of
work
was government sector. As the chart shows, graduates worked in full-time
work
more, than in part-time
work
, 52% and 15%, respectively.
Then
,
students
who worked at full-time postgrad study were the same as
students
who did not know where to
work
, both with 8% figure.
Students
who did not
work
were more than graduates who worked at part-time jobs and at postgrad study. 12% and 5%, respectively. As the table shows, starting with freelance consultants. Freelance consultants had 4 types of salaries. The most highly paid was $100.000+ were the same with $75.000-99.999. Both figures were 40%.
Then
,
workers
who got $50.000-74.999 were more than
workers
who got $25.000-49.999, 15% and 5% respectively. The next
work
was in the government sector. Most employees got a salary of $100.000+,
whereas
the
last
one was $25.000-49.999, 50% and 5%. The
workers
who got a salary of $75.000 were more than those who got $50.000-74.999, 30% and 15%, respectively. The next type of employment was privacy companies. The
workers
who paid $50.000-74,999 had the most
workers
with a 35% figure
,
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and the least one worker who paid $25.000-49.999 with a 10% figure. Employers who paid $100.000+ were more than those who got a salary of $75.000-99.999, 30% and 25% after five years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, students, workers with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • part-time work
  • full-time work
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • career trends
  • employment opportunities
  • flexibility
  • specialization
  • competitive job market
  • salary
  • earning potential
  • private sector
  • government sector
  • freelance work
  • public policy
  • cultural preservation
  • consulting
  • corporate anthropology
  • expertise
  • accrued
  • distribution
  • sector
  • trend
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