The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the procedure of how
plastic
bottles
are converted into something.
Overall
, this
process happens in a continuous cycle with no start and no end. It is obvious that the process involves nine manmade stages, beginning with the collection of plastic
bottles
and ending with the production of new items, after which the cycle repeats.
The first two steps in this
process are throwing used plastic
bottles
into trash bins and transporting them by special vehicles. Then
, those that are taken to a recycling centre proceed to the sorting stage. Those are crushed with particular machines after compressing into
block shapes. By the way, cleaning with liquid is one of the phases in that step.
Once, it begins to be processed until becomes pelletsCorrect pronoun usage
them into
,
and flows to other spaces Remove the comma
apply
due to
heating. The processed plastic
bottles
qualified as raw material at this
stage. The coarse materials which were the pellets before started to use
Wrong verb form
be used
making
and producing some products and covering some meals.Change preposition
in making
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