Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

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The long
amount
of
time
of
traveling
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travelling
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as well as
the massive transport
delays
has been a worldwide phenomenon these days. Numerous people have to deal with these
problems
,
while
this
should be
adress
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addressed
by the government as
this
is consider
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is considered
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as
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apply
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a national
issue
.
This
essay will explore the
causes
of the
problems
and the perfect solution to tackle these
issue
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issues
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. A wide range of people nowadays have experienced
the
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delays
of
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in
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transportation
and
the
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a
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long
amount
of
time
to reach
the
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their
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destinations.
This
phenomenon may
be
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be caused
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causes
by
variety
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a variety
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reasons
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of reasons
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. In terms of
road
transportation
such
as busses,
this
might
be
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be caused
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causes
by the
traffic
that
occur
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occurs
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in the middle of the way. It cannot be denied that many countries still
did
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do
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not have a special line for public
transportation
as their only
spaces
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space
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to avoid the
traffic
with other private cars.
Furthermore
, in terms of air
transportation
such
as air
plane
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planes
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,
this
delays
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delay
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problem might happen
due to
the
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bad weather that forces the schedule to be postponed until it
is consider
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is considered
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to be safe to fly.
On the other hand
, the long journey times to travel nowadays significantly as a
results
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result
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of terrible
traffic
issue
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issues
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in
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on
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the
road
. The
amount
of vehicles
in
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on
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the
road
is not align
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is not aligned
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with the
road
spaces
that
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which
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affect
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affects
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the
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vehicle stacking in many countries.
Additionally
, the organizing of
road
transportation
also
decline
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declined
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over the years. Many
road
sign
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signs
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in
a
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apply
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cities including major cities have
been vanished
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vanished
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that
lead
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to many drivers
ignored
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ignoring
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the driving rule.
This
traffic
problem has been
occur
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occurring
occurred
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for a long
time
,
however
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however,
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there
are
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is
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still no
efective
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effective
solution
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solutions
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to tackle
this
problem yet.
To sum up
, the
issue
of transport
delays
and the long journey
time
is not a recent
problems
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problem
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.
Due to the
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lack of
road
organizing
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organisation
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that
lead
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leads
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to bad
traffic
causes
these
problems
. To handle
this
, it is important for the government to
limiting
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limit
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the
amount
of vehicles
in
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on
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the
road
per
days
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day
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as part of controlling the
traffic
.
This
could be done by creating a regulation to
devide
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decide
divide
the type of
transportation
that
allowed
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allows
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to drive
in
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on
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the
road
each day.
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Try to provide more specific examples and details to support your points. This will strengthen your arguments and make your essay more persuasive.
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coherence cohesion
You have a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps frame your argument and bring your discussion to a satisfying close.
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You've addressed the prompt well by identifying causes of transport delays and suggesting solutions.
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Your essay has a clear structure with distinct paragraphs for causes and solutions, which aids in understanding your main points.
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