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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.
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The table provides information
of
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on
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 six types of languages, which are really popular
by
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among
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 their native and
non-native
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speakers
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.
Overall
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,
Mandarin
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Chinese
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 displays the largest
number
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 of native
speaker
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speakers
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,
while
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 English
on the other hand
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, shows the highest
number
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 among
non-native
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speakers
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.
However
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, in total
number
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 of
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speakers
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speakers,
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Mandarin
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Chinese
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 overshadows all languages.
Additionally
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, Portuguese demonstrates the lowest amount around them.
To begin
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 with,
Mandarin
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Chinese
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 is the most common language
between
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among
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speaker
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speakers
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 with 900
million
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 and shows the highest amount in total ( 1090
million
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 ).
However
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, English followed closely to
Mandarin
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Chinese
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 with 942
million
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 in total,
as well as
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 once
dominates
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dominated
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Mandarin
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Chinese
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in
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among
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non-native
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speakers
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.
Moreover
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, Hindi
also
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 illustrates good results with 490
million
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in
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apply
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total
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number of
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apply
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speakers
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,
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apply
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 and held second place
within
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among
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speakers
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In contrast
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, Spanish and Arabic languages
positions
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position
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 fourth and fifth places with 420
million
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 and 230
million
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, respectively in total.
However
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, Spanish depicts 350
million
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 native
speakers
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 and even dominates English.
Furthermore
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, Portuguese reports
considerably
Correct article usage
a considerably
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 small
number
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 with 203
million
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between
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among
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speakers
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 and 10
million
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 among
non-native
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speakers
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words non-native, speakers, mandarin, chinese, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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