The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.
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The table provides information
of
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six types of languages, which are really popular
by
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among
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their native and
non-native
speakers
.
Overall
,
Mandarin
Chinese
displays the largest
number
of native
speaker
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speakers
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,
while
English
on the other hand
, shows the highest
number
among
non-native
speakers
.
However
, in total
number
of
speakers
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speakers,
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Mandarin
Chinese
overshadows all languages.
Additionally
, Portuguese demonstrates the lowest amount around them.
To begin
with,
Mandarin
Chinese
is the most common language
between
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among
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native
speaker
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speakers
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with 900
million
and shows the highest amount in total ( 1090
million
).
However
, English followed closely to
Mandarin
Chinese
with 942
million
in total,
as well as
once
dominates
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dominated
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Mandarin
Chinese
in
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among
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non-native
speakers
.
Moreover
, Hindi
also
illustrates good results with 490
million
in
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total
number of
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apply
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speakers
,
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and held second place
within
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among
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native
speakers
.
In contrast
, Spanish and Arabic languages
positions
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position
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fourth and fifth places with 420
million
and 230
million
, respectively in total.
However
, Spanish depicts 350
million
native
speakers
and even dominates English.
Furthermore
, Portuguese reports
considerably
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a considerably
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small
number
with 203
million
between
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among
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native
speakers
and 10
million
among
non-native
speakers
.
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