The bar chart shows the percentage of young people in higher education in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of younger individuals in university education in four countries in 2000, 2005, and 2010.
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, it is clearly obvious that Countries A and D exhibited a gradual increase in the percentage of students, which means that their citizens care about holding a higher degree, Linking Words
while
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B was at the same level till 2010.
On the one hand, Countries A and D improved and showed a high percentage of tertiary education learners. Use synonyms
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A was about 35% in 2000, Use synonyms
then
it rose by about 15% in 2005, and it reached approximately 60% in 2010. Regarding Linking Words
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D, it was about 45% in 2000. In 2005, it increased to 50%, and in 2010, it hit the highest percentage among other competitors; it was 60% of learners.
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On the other hand
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C was about 40% in 2000, and it climbed to almost 50% in 2005 and remained constant till 2010. Use synonyms
Whereas
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B fluctuated at around 40%; in 2000 and 2010, it was 40%, but in 2005, it decreased slightly to about 2%.Use synonyms
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