The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below compares the changes in the university sports campus between 1990 and now.

Overall

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, it is noticeable that

this

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court does not have both the

park

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and the

car

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park

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now,

however

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, there are new areas

such

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as the basketball court and the fitness centre.

Moreover

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, the cafe and reception buildings stayed the same over the given period. In 1990,

this

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university campus consisted of the

park

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at the left of the top corner and the

car

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park

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below. Right to the

car

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park

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, there were

couple

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a couple

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of tennis

courts

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nearby to the right corner at the bottom, and above these

courts

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this

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sports place

also

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had a small changing room for sportsmen, which was followed by the reception with a cafe located together slightly over.

Finally

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, It consisted of the pool which was

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apply

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outdoor

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outdoors

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By contrast

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,we can see that there are now double

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tennis

courts

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which have replaced the

car

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park

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whereas

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the

park

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was replaced by the basketball court.

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, the changing room has increased in size and was relocated to the site of the former tennis

courts

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, and there is the new fitness centre below. The only infrastructures that have stayed in place are the reception and the cafe.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, car, courts with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

207 words

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