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Formal examination are a way to get student performance. Many people think that course work and project are important. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Many people think that judging
student
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 grades through the orthodox examination
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 is the right approach and others believe that
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conducting
 course work and
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 is better. I agree that issuing
projects
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 and
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 can become
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 right approach to
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student
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 performance.
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 it is a better
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 to find out
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whether he will be able to
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conduct
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, which were taught in the class. Formal examination is not a proper
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 to grade a
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 and it only improves cramming skills. If we try to examine them through
projects
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 and course
tasks
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, I believe we will be getting better performers. All students have to live a practical life and
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 of examination is not going to help them.
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, doctors get their
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official
 license to practice after performing medical procedures. When a
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 is stuffing his mind with all knowledge and does not know the concept of it,
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 what is the point of the formal exams only
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, I am 30 years old now and I
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 never used algebra in my whole life because I did not apply it in my
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 and in my task. In my opinion
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monthly formal tests
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 be conducted but for the
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 a
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 must pass, ceratin assigned
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 and
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, clear his
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.
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 it will be challenging to conduct
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but certainly, It will be
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 effective method to grade a
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. In conclusion, we must update the system.
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 every
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 can not be scored by the score he gets so to provide him with
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 and
projects
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, we can analyze every single
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student's
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 performance and grade them through a proper method
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You make a clear stance on the issue, indicating that you agree with using coursework and projects to measure student performance.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standardized tests
  • uniform measure
  • student performance
  • creativity
  • practical skills
  • coursework
  • projects
  • research
  • critical thinking
  • teamwork
  • application of knowledge
  • real-world scenarios
  • continuous assessment
  • accurate reflection
  • disadvantage
  • exam conditions
  • independent learning
  • self-discipline
  • higher education
  • professional environments
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