The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts
illustrates
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the amount of
world
forest
and
timber
in five different nations.
Overall
, the largest
forest
in those regions is
Africa
with 27 per cent.
Otherwise
,
timber
in
Africa
only
production for
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9 per cent
over
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of
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the
forest
. Meanwhile, Asia
have
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14% of
greenland
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Greenland
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, eventually having 18%
timber
more than their portion of woodland.
In addition
, the largest production of
Timber
is
North
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America
at 30% of their 25% timberland. Looking at the
world
forest
chart,
Africa
and North
America
owns
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own
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nearly 30% of
forest
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the forest
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in the
world
.
While
, Europe had 18% of
greenland
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Greenland
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in the
world
and
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apply
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following
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followed
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by South
America
who
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which
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owns 16
portion
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portions
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of
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the woods
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woods
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wood
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and Asia with 14%
from
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of
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total
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the total
a total
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forest
in the
world
, making them the least nation
who owns
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that
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world
forest
. Moving to the other pie,
Africa
who expected to be have the largest production of
timber
apparently only had 9%
timber
which the lowest nation
who
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that
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output
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logs.
While
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, North
America
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has whose
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whose
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second
of owning
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largest
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forest
in the
world
,
outputing
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outputting
timber
at 30%
which
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apply
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overtaking
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overtakes
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the area of the woods and
making
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makes
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them the most productive
producting
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producing
timber
region .
Similary
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Similarly
with other
nation
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nations
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,
who
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apply
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maximalized their
greenland
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Greenland
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into timbers until 18-23%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words world, forest, timber, africa, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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