The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts
illustrates
the amount of Change the verb form
illustrate
world
forest
and timber
in five different nations. Overall
, the largest forest
in those regions is Africa
with 27 per cent. Otherwise
, timber
in Africa
only production for
9 per cent Wrong verb form
produces
over
the Change preposition
of
forest
. Meanwhile, Asia have
14% of Change the verb form
has
greenland
, eventually having 18% Change the capitalization
Greenland
timber
more than their portion of woodland. In addition
, the largest production of Timber
is North
Change preposition
in North
America
at 30% of their 25% timberland.
Looking at the world
forest
chart, Africa
and North America
owns
nearly 30% of Correct subject-verb agreement
own
forest
in the Add an article
the forest
world
. While
, Europe had 18% of greenland
in the Change the capitalization
Greenland
world
and
Correct word choice
apply
following
by South Wrong verb form
followed
America
who
owns 16 Correct pronoun usage
which
portion
of Change to a plural noun
portions
Correct article usage
the woods
woods
and Asia with 14% Fix the agreement mistake
wood
from
Change preposition
of
total
Add an article
the total
a total
forest
in the world
, making them the least nation who owns
Verb problem
that
world
forest
.
Moving to the other pie, Africa
who expected to be have the largest production of timber
apparently only had 9% timber
which the lowest nation who
Correct pronoun usage
that
output
logs. Correct subject-verb agreement
outputs
While
, North Change preposition
apply
America
Add a missing verb
has whose
whose
second Correct determiner usage
the
of owning
Verb problem
largest
forest
in the world
, outputing
Correct your spelling
outputting
timber
at 30% which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
overtaking
the area of the woods and Wrong verb form
overtakes
making
them the most productive Wrong verb form
makes
producting
Correct your spelling
producing
timber
region .Similary
with other Correct your spelling
Similarly
nation
, Fix the agreement mistake
nations
who
maximalized their Correct pronoun usage
apply
greenland
into timbers until 18-23%.Change the capitalization
Greenland
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, forest, timber, africa, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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