More and more countries have a problem with plastic waste, polluting the countryside and the oceans. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?
Nowadays, plastic consumption has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the public's attention. Some people
said
our environment has been destroyed by polymers, Wrong verb form
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while
others hold the view that consequences
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the consequences
serious
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essay, I will dicuss
the drawbacks of Correct your spelling
discuss
this
subject and point out some associated solutions.
First and foremost, the consumption on
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of
arcylic
is increasing Correct your spelling
acrylic
due to
the convinence
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convenience
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and shops are providing them to customers. Correct your spelling
Supermarket
However
, people will just dump the plastic to
waste, and polymers never be able to dissolve into Change preposition
into
simplier
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simpler
simple
structure
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structures
Therefore
, they will remain as waste in the landfill.
Secondly
, it is an indisputable fact that plastics are fetal materials for both micro-organisms and macro-organisms. The ones that thrown
away into nature by mankind, certainly are not recycled in Add a missing verb
are thrown
a
short term. Correct article usage
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As a consequence
, they will destroy almost all vegatation
around the world. To illustrate, the northern judges of Correct your spelling
vegetation
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are ruined by tourists. Equally important is the issue of marine debris. It is reported that marine animals are under threat of extinction by ocean trash. To explain, it is suggested that predatory primate-marine animals swallow up the Change the capitalization
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trashes
of cargo ships or pleasure boats Correct subject-verb agreement
trash
nearby
their prey and these toxic substances, for Correct your spelling
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, cause mass stranding in whales.
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Nonetheless
, scientists have come up with a number of approaches to answer each issue. Firstly
, this
matter could be solved by cultivating and teaching citizens about this
global danger. To illustrate, environmentalists can launch various campaigns around the world, both on-site and online on social media, to inform fellows. Secondly
, governments should fix a number of crucial laws, principles and base policies for ships and even steam-boats to forbid the discharge of nylon rubbishes into water supplies.
In conclusion, it is presumably unlikely to resolve this
international obsession in the foreseeable future, but if dwellers and related national bodies try to find the proposed solution, maybe, this
problem will be addressed.Submitted by kiqueenie95 on
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Language
Consider using more precise language and terms, especially when discussing scientific aspects (e.g. 'arcylic' should be 'acrylic', 'convinence' to 'convenience').
Development
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Grammar
Revisit grammatical structures to enhance clarity and prevent misunderstandings, for example 'plastics are fetal materials' which likely should be 'fatal'.
Introduction
The essay provides a clear introduction outlining the issue of plastic waste and its increasing influence globally.
Conclusion
Offers a conclusion that acknowledges both challenges and potential solutions, showing a balanced understanding.
Solutions
Includes relevant solutions, such as advocating for social awareness campaigns and governmental regulations.
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