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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart gives information about the
students
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 who finished the Anthropology faculty at a university and what they did after finishing their undergraduate degree. The table gives data on the earnings of the anthropologists in their jobs over the
last
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 five years.
Overall
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, the majority of admissions choose full-time
work
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 when they graduate from the university. The income of the government sector earned the highest amount. After the
students
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 finish their destination of sociology graduate. they choose 52 % full-time
work
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. In the field of sociology graduate
students
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work
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 full-time postgrad study and Not known categories with the same 8 % percentage. The lowest percentage of
students
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 choose Part-time jobs and postgrad study.
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, the percentages of graduates who are unemployed and those who
work
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 part-time account for 12% and 15%, respectively. As for the salaries of Anthropology graduates after five years of
work
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, the money of
government
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the government
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 sector will earn the highest salary.
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, 50 % of them will earn more than $100,000 .
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, 5% of them take the same money $25,000 - $49,999 with Freelance consultants.
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, the percentage of Private companies earning more than $100,000 is the lowest among others.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • part-time work
  • full-time work
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • career trends
  • employment opportunities
  • flexibility
  • specialization
  • competitive job market
  • salary
  • earning potential
  • private sector
  • government sector
  • freelance work
  • public policy
  • cultural preservation
  • consulting
  • corporate anthropology
  • expertise
  • accrued
  • distribution
  • sector
  • trend
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