The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The chart compares what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their degree course.the table compares the salaries of anthropologists in
work
after 5 years.
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were more than graduates who worked at part-time jobs and at postgrad study. 12% and 5%, respectively.
As the table shows, starting with freelance consultants. Freelance consultants had 4 types of salaries. The most highly paid was $100.000+ were the same with $75.000-99.999. Both figures were 40%. Use synonyms
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one was $25.000-49.999, 50% and 5%. The Linking Words
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who got a salary of $75.000 were more than those who got $50.000-74.999, 30% and 15%, respectively. The next type of employment was privacy companies. The Use synonyms
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and the least one worker who paid $25.000-49.999 with a 10% figure. Employers who paid $100.000+ were more than those who got a salary of $75.000-99.999, 30% and 25%.Remove the comma
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