The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph
compare
the amount of shops closed and the amount of shops opened in the country over a period of 7 years.
Change the verb form
compares
It is clear that
the number
of shop
opening
was higher than the Fix the agreement mistake
openings
number
of shop
closures
at first,
but it lower
than Add a missing verb
was lower
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
shop
closures
in the end. Besides
, the number
of shop
closures
saw a dramatic decline in 2015.
In 2011, the number
of shop
opening
stood at around 8500, but it experienced a Fix the agreement mistake
openings
shrap
decrease to 4000 next year. Correct your spelling
sharp
However
, openings increased to 6200 and had closed by closures
in 2014. The number
of shop
opening
dropped to 4000 in 2015 and fell consistently. Fix the agreement mistake
openings
Finally
reaching 3000 by 2018.
The figure of
Change preposition
for
closures
fluctuate between 6000 and 7000 from 2011 to 2014. On the other hand
, the line graph has slumped about 600 in 2015, then
rose rapidly to 5000 next year. Between 2016 and 2018, the number
of shop
closures
remainde
stable at just over 5000.Correct your spelling
remained
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shop, closures with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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