It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The discussion about whether education should be provided to offenders during their imprisonment to help them find jobs

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some benefits to

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, I still think that

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them is not the best

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to reduce crime. The idea of educating offenders in prison to improve their employment ability is a straightforward solution.

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, education

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more likely to integrate smoothly into

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. They can form

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relationships in the new surroundings, rather than feeling lonely and

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back to their former criminal partner.

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equipping

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to employ means that they no longer need to rely on government welfare.

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can avoid the situation where

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completely disconnected

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after releasing from prison and

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to live on government support, which in turn the resources that can be used for other facility construction.

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, I will argue that it is difficult to implement and take effect,

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having a negative

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on

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. The primary thing we should consider is the social response, which

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a great injustice to the victims and hard to get support from the units of employment. People tend to think in terms of the victims,

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them to be rescued after their crime, which is unfair to victims.

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, many

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have deep-rooted psychological problems, which

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hard and even impossible to solve their barriers by educating and regulating during imprisonment.

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, people with antisocial personality disorder may reoffend even if they

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job skills. In conclusion,

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criminals

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is a good method to benefit both

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and

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themselves, I still view that

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is hard to implement and

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