In many big cities around the world people find it hard to secure jobs. What are the reasons for this? What can be done about this issue?

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difficult and challenging. I believe exploring the causes of

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problem can assist in finding suitable solutions to resolve it.

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urban population could partly account for difficulties

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finding suitable jobs in big

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. Many people immigrate to big

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from towns to improve the quality of their lives

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getting much

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and using the facilities

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situation

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the number of job applicants

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more than

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positions and most of them

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unemployed. To address

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issue, the government should control the big

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population by encouraging people to live in

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and small towns by making well-paid job opportunities

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the quality of convenience

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, adults would become curious about being in their hometowns. Big companies which are in urban areas expect potential employees to have

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great experience in the required field,

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, those applicants who are young and are not very experienced cannot find a suitable position, even though, some of them may have graduated from well-known universities.

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, one of my friends who was a smart student at university and obtained high qualifications could not find a related occupation to his major and he has been unemployed for approximately 3 years. If companies and employers hire young people as

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and hold apprenticeship courses for them, they will be allowed to become specialists over a short time

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they are working.

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way leads to have young workforce with high efficiency in society and it can solve sort of unemployment problem in big

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.

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, even though population growth in large

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, and big companies’

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to employ

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experienced employees contributes to

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finding

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difficult secure jobs, Governments and employers can remedy the situation in my opinion. Providing good facilities and suitable jobs in small

town

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towns

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and hiring youth with less experience are steps in the right direction.