You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowaday
Correct your spelling
Nowadays
show examples
, the students of university live
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
their
home
Fix the agreement mistake
homes
show examples
with family
while
study
Wrong verb form
studying
show examples
.
However
, in other
countries
Add a comma
countries,
show examples
students study university in
other city
Change the wording
another city
other cities
show examples
. I think
this
point
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
advantages and disadvantages. When you live at
home
with your family, you mustn't pay for hiring
home
. If you live at
home
, you will meet your family
everday
Correct your spelling
every day
so it is very good for you because everybody
alway
Correct your spelling
always
want
Change the verb form
wants
show examples
to live near family to help them when they
need
Correct pronoun usage
need it
show examples
.
Morever
Correct your spelling
Moreover
, you live at
home
is very comfortable and it
help
Change the verb form
helps
show examples
you study better than live another city. You can go to the
entertainmet
Correct your spelling
entertainment
center to
relaxing
Wrong verb form
relax
show examples
with your
friend
Fix the agreement mistake
friends
show examples
. But it
also
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
a lot of disadvantages
Submitted by phamnhung275 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: