More and more people are moving from rural areas to live in cities. What problem can this cause? How can these problems be solved?

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Nowadays it is hard to live in rural

areas

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like villages, that’s why people are moving to big cities. The main problems are that the small rural

areas

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can disappear, but

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appear

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problems with job places.

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, when the public decides to leave their cottage settlement, they do not understand the fact that it can be eliminated from the map and disappear.

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, the number of hamlets

reduces

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and we can call it a ghost village, where you can not find someone or something.

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, in Moldova because of rural-urban

migration

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migration,

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the village of Bucuria in the Soroca district disappeared. In brief, the small population can cause the death of villages.

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problem can be solved by

making

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more opportunities for the community.

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, help them with free transport to big cities or transport some facilities in smaller

areas

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, they make

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decision because they want a better life.

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, they are running from poverty because they do not want to live in the past when everyone is going in the future. Usually, people think that they can find a wonderful job with a big salary. In fact, the biggest problem it can cause is overpopulation. Because of big groups of humans from villages, companies can not make more palaces of work for everyone. To exemplify, my hometown is surrounded by small

areas

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such

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as Lapusna or Loganesti.

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, because of

overcrowding

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overcrowding,

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you can not find a job in my city.

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, not only are they not able to work, but citizens too. We can fix

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issue by giving them the opportunity to receive money from small things and make more workplaces in their township. In conclusion, it is not good that they are leaving their

birth place

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birthplace

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because it damages their area and

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big cities with

influx

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the influx

an influx

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of citizens.

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More and more people are moving from rural areas to live in cities. What problem can this cause? How can these problems be solved?

Your opinion

: Write about the following topic: A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, -introduce your previous work experience -tell the manager which department you want to work -describe what expectation you have from the job

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.