Question You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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will live
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, the student who
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another
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country will face some
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than studying there like economic cultures that kind of various ways to live some
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people see
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as a disadvantage but in my view, it is so useful to know a new people and live between them
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travelling is an
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activity. But it deserves is,
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to be honest living with your family is useful too.
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day and return to your home you will find your mother and you will ask her at least for food and
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she will care about you if you need something she will love to help you and that has happened to me personally In the end,
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want to say that everything in
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also
have
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advantage
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and
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disadvantage
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you will find your mother and you will ask her at least for food and
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she will care about you if you need something she will love to help you and that has happened to me personally
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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