The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of
water
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consumption being used for six different continents in the world.
Overall
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, it can be seen that most of the
water
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used
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is used
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for agricultural activities in almost every continent
given
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apply
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.
Conversely
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, domestic consumption was the lowest. On the one hand, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia,
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used their maximum amount of
water
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on
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for
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agricultural purposes around (84%, 88% and 81% respectively).
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, they used
minimum
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the minimum
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amount of
water
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on
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industrial applications and domestic
use
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approximately, 5-12%
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industrial
use
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and 7-9%
in
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everyday
use
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. 5%
use
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of domestic applications consumed the lowest amount of
water
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.
However
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, in Central Asia domestic applications accounted for just 5% of
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consumption, which
the
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is the
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lowest among all uses
On the other hand
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, North America and Europe used the majority of the
water
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on
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in
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their manufacturing
use
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nearly (48% and 53% separately).
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, South Africa used a large proportion of
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on
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agricultural
use
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, 19%
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for
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domestic
use
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, and
lastly
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10%
on
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industrial
use
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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