Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Every
nation
in the world is currently dealing with serious issues related to the environment, population, and
also
education. It is forecasted that these problems will keep on happening in the next ten years. As a developing country, Indonesia has a lot of challenges to combat.
This
essay will explain the possible issues
this
nation
will face and how to overcome them. The biggest problem
that is
happening right now and might be worse in the future is the impact of climate change.
For example
, the capital city of Indonesia, Jakarta, is currently sinking
due to
the rising sea level exacerbated by the unrestricted use of groundwater. It is predicted that Jakarta will be fully underwater by 2030 if nothing is done to fix it. Other than that, the
nation
has a huge gap in the education sector. High-quality schools can only be accessed by the rich
due to
their high tuition fees.
As a result
, lower-class citizens will never be as educated as those with wealth. Government support is the biggest hope to tackle these problems. In order to reduce the effects of climate change, the authority must enforce strict regulations
such
as restrictions on groundwater exploitation.
Furthermore
, to narrow the gap in learning inequality, the government can provide subsidies so lower-class students can attend better-quality schools.
In addition
, the authority can
also
allocate more funding for the development of schools in remote areas to enhance the quality of education across the
nation
.
To sum up
, Indonesia is a developing country with many challenges happening today and in the next ten years. Some of the most probable issues to happen are related to climate change and learning inequalities. To mitigate
this
, the authority must implement and enforce stricter regulations to control the habits of its citizens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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