The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
It can be seen in the given table
is
the amount of sold various phone in 2006 to 2012. Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, Samsung surged in every period
, similary
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similarly
similar
with
Apple Change preposition
to
who
rose upwards even Correct pronoun usage
which
they're
just launched in 2007. Meanwhile, Motorola dipped fall during the Correct word choice
though they're
period
, whereas
Nokia and Ericsson fluctuated and drop
in 2012.
Looking at the details, Samsung started with 117 Wrong verb form
dropped
million
phones sold in 2006 and grew gradually throughout the period
and reached a peak over all the phone brands with nearly 400 million
sold in
six Change preposition
apply
year
later. Change to a plural noun
years
While
,
Apple released late in 2007 had sold roughly 2.3 Remove the comma
apply
million
and doubled during the period
until sold accounted for 135.8 million
in 2012.
Moving to the other brand
, for five years
Nokia was the most popular brand
and had sold over 400 million
units over the years
. However
, it stays
popular for the next 5 Wrong verb form
stayed
years
and fluctuated until dropped in 2012 by only sold
335 Wrong verb form
selling
million
units. Another noticable
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noticeable
notable
brand
can be seen is Motorola who
Correct pronoun usage
which
solds
over 200 Correct your spelling
sold
million
phones in 2006 and can't
cope with the other Wrong verb form
couldn't
popularity
Replace the word
popular
brand
until made up only had
sold 28 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 2012. Similarity with
Erricson who only sold the most Change preposition
to
by
102 Change preposition
apply
million
units in 2007 and falling
to 28 Wrong verb form
fell
million
in six years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, million, brand, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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