The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the carts show how it was distributed.
The table and chart illustrate
about
the police Change preposition
apply
budget
in one area of Britain in 2017 and 2018. The table gives information about where the Use synonyms
budget
came from and the charts provide Use synonyms
informatio
about Correct your spelling
information
they
way the Correct your spelling
the
budget
was allocated.
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Overall
, Linking Words
police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
was in 2018 higher than Use synonyms
2017
for all sources Change preposition
in 2017
such
as national government and local taxes, other sources. Linking Words
While
the Linking Words
budget
distributed to buildings and transport Use synonyms
was remained
in 2017 and 2018
It was clearly seen from the tableChange to the active voice
remained
,
Correct word choice
that, national
national
government contributed to the Add an article
the national
budget
Use synonyms
accounted
for the largest amount with 175.5m in 2017 and 177.8m in 2018. The local taxes in 2017 and 2018 Correct word choice
and accounted
was
91.2m and 102.3m respectively. Other sources Correct subject-verb agreement
were
was
the lowest amount with 38m and 38.5m in 2017 and 2018 respectively. Change the verb form
were
While
Linking Words
,
the percentage of the Remove the comma
apply
budget
distributed to salaires was the largest figure in 2017 and 2018 at 75% and 69% respectively. Building and transport stayed the same proportion in 2017 and 2018, Use synonyms
while
the figures Linking Words
of
technology in 2018 Change preposition
for
was
higher than the figure in 2017Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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