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The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.

The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.
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The provided line chart illustrates a study predicting the major 3 languages that millions of individuals will choose to study ranging from the
years
 of 2020 to 2030. From a general point of view, the vast majority will opt out to learn
English
 among the choices;
however
 Mandarin is the language that would gain the most popularity in the decade-long research.
To begin
 with, the lingua
that is
 most common amongst users is by far
English
 with a starting point of 550
million
students
. In its first four
years
, steady growth can be demonstrated with approximately 150
million
 more
students
 pursuing an education in
English
. Surprisingly
this
 trend has been halted for 2
years
 with a reduction of about 80
million
;
although
 in its
last
 four
years
 a significant increase to 750
million
students
.
Furthermore
, a shocking surge is given for Mandarin, gaining almost 500
million
students
 in its decade-long run.
On the contrary
, Spanish learners have shown slow steady growth over the
years
, even plateauing between 2022 to 2024.
Lastly
, the interest in Spanish studies sees an uproar starting from the year 2026 to the end of the decade, gaining about 200
million
students
 and peaking at approximately 500
million
 people. To summarize, the vast majority prefer a study in
English
 with a fluctuating trend,
on the other hand
, the one that has piqued people's interest is Mandarin gaining around 500
million
 new entries in the span of 10
years
. Lat of all, Spanish has proved a slowly increasing trend among the 3 languages.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, english, million, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slow" was used 2 times.
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