Some people believe that all students should be required to study a foreign language in school. Others feel that it is not necessary and that students should have the freedom to choose whether or not to study a foreign language. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Many individuals think that a foreign
language
should be compulsory for every
student
in the
school
.
Conversely
, others believe that
students
should have their own opinion
whether
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to learn a foreign
language
or not. In
this
essay, I will examine both perspectives and will provide my view.
To begin
with, many people believe that
school
should teach their
children
how to communicate in different languages
instead
of
mother
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the mother
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language
so, their
children
can
study
outside of the country.
For instance
, many parents in Bangladesh,
they
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want their
children
to
study
abroad,
because
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and because
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of that reason, lots of
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opened
for teaching
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to teach
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a
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student
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students
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how to get
a
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best score in IELTS which is an English testing system, if
students
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in that examination they will get an immense amount of opportunity to
study
abroad.
On the other hand
, those who
doesn't
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don't
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care about learning a foreign
language
should be required in the
school
, because they believe that the
student
should be the one who's going to select a foreign
language
to
study
or not and
school
should focus on their decision.
For example
, in China,
the
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50% of
students
graduated with
foreign
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a foreign
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language
and the other 50%
were
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graduated without any other languages.
However
, both
of
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students
were able to achieve their desired
goal
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goals
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. In conclusion, many parents might think that it will be
wise
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decision that the
school
should teach them other languages
instead
of
native
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their native
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language
while
, others visualized that it will be much
wise
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to let their
children
to
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apply
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make their
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own decision
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decision
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and focus on their dreams. In my opinion, it should be up to the
student
to decide whether they want or not.
Submitted by AL NURE FOYZUR REZA SUPRIO on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural understanding
  • globalized world
  • multilingual
  • compulsory education
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • diverse cultures
  • job market
  • international business
  • tourism
  • diplomacy
  • aptitude for languages
  • disengagement
  • tailor their education
  • flexibility
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