Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * describe where you lived when you were a student at the university * recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation * warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Shreyas, Hope you are doing well, Recently I got your letter and read everything that you have written.
First,
I need to thank you for choosing ABS University for your post-graduation. And you asked me specifically about accommodation to live and study. I will tell you in
this
letter clearly. When I was studying for graduation at ABS
university
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University
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, I lived on Johnson Street which is located
near
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nearly
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500 meters from a college. I live in a single bedroom
cottage
to live and study and
also
Mr.
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Mr
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Kingston, he is the owner of that
cottage
and he is good to you. He is living with her wife on the ground floor home. I would recommend going to Mr. Kingston’s
cottage
because he charges
very
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small amount and one more benefit like they will arrange food at an affordable price, compared to the hotels, you can eat home food here. If you are not satisfied with Mr. Kingston’s
cottage
,
then
, I will look for another
cottage
but one thing I warn you, don’t stay at the hostel there will be more costs compared to the fee structure.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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