Traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. It has a negative effect on families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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people's

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. It is believed that these days every country's

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foods

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food

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is being replaced by the other country's

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foods

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food

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essay

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i

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will discuss both the agree and disagree

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of

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statement.

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with the most prominent reason,

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globalization

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globalization,

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people have started

practicising

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practising

having fast

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foods

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food

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instead

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of their local

food

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as it is cheaper and is easily available. It is

low

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in cost than

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we have for our everyday life

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that

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is dal, bhat tarkari being a

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.

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: Momos are steamed

dompling

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dumpling

dumplings

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quite cheap and

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that

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apply

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is

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found easily in every

food

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stalls

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additionally

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we

donot

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do not

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Further more

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,

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the availability of fast snacks children

donot

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do not

like to have traditional

food

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that

are

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healthy

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gives

you

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apply

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energy. Traditional

foods

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are healthy in comparison to

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of

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fast stall

foods

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as

their

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is no other mixture as we can find in stall

food

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as well

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having daal bhat in the morning gives you energy

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day to work. in conclusion,

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however

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there are both the positive and negative

aspect

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aspects

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of

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i

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believe that traditional

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foods

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food

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availability

available

availabilty

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availability

have been decreased

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due

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sue

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due

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to the availability of cheap stall

foods

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