Traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. It has a negative effect on families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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food
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people's
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. It is believed that these days every country's
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food
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is being replaced by the other country's
foods
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. In
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will discuss both the agree and disagree
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due to
globalization
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globalization,
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people have started
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practising
having fast
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instead
of their local
food
as it is cheaper and is easily available. It is
low
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in cost than
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we have for our everyday life
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is dal, bhat tarkari being a
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.
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quite cheap and
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apply
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is
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found easily in every
food
stalls
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additionally
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we
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do not
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,
due to
the availability of fast snacks children
donot
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do not
like to have traditional
food
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healthy
as well as
gives
you
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apply
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energy. Traditional
foods
are healthy in comparison to
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of
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fast stall
foods
as
their
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is no other mixture as we can find in stall
food
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having daal bhat in the morning gives you energy
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day to work. in conclusion,
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there are both the positive and negative
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of
this
i
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believe that traditional
foods
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food
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availability
available
availabilty
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availability
have been decreased
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due
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sue
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due
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to the availability of cheap stall
foods
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural identity
  • Heritage
  • Cultural uniqueness
  • Nutritional value
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart diseases
  • Local economy
  • Family dynamics
  • Communal activity
  • Sustainable practices
  • Carbon footprint
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Food industry
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