Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Many individuals state that insufficient
amount
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of garbage from houses were being reused. For that reason, they
also
said that the
government
should create rules and regulations to
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raise
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the amount of salvaging. In
this
essay, I will examine both
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of view and will provide my thoughts.
To begin
with, people who
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in a
suburb
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area,
because
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apply
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of
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they
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are
unware
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unaware
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of
potential
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of used things and they think that it's
a
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trash
and they often throw away their
trash
anywhere
as a result
, garbage collectors
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t
find a way to recycle those
trashes
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.
For instance
, many villagers don'
t
care about their
wastes
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waste
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they don'
t
know about recycling and what's the importance of recycling,
because
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of that majority of their waste not
going
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for
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recycling
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the recycling
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process.
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, because of that
reason
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their people
affected
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are affected
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by economic issues.
On the other hand
, those who believe that if the
government
make rules and regulations people will be more aware than before and those who don'
t
care much about recycling
they
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will be encouraged by
governments
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policies.
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a
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country named Aldia, the
government
restricted
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throwing
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to throw
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away
trash
or garbage everywhere, if someone
avoid
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to do
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that they
will
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be punished by the
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,
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because
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of that reason individuals from that location were encouraged by the
government
and successfully
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recycle
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recycling
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recycle
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their
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waste
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wastes
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. In conclusion, individuals should be aware
about
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recycling because of what potential outcome it will provide and it can
also
brighten our natural environment without awareness they might not recycle enough
trash
which could lead to economic damage.
However
, the
government
should
also
encourage their residents to recycle properly through
guideline
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guidelines
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and give
restriction
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restrictions
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for it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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