The table in the above image shows the source of money for the police budget. The chart shows how it was spent. Both of these images capture data from the year 2017 to 2018.

The table and the pie charts provide key information about the money sources for the public

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and where it was spent in the time ranging from 2017 to 2018. The units are measured in numbers and percentages.

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, it is clear from the graph that the highest

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source was from the national government in both mentioned years,

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local taxes had a slight increase in 2018.

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, the significant spent from the

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was on the salaries category.

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the data shown, the

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resources in 2018 experienced an in total increase which was almost 319 million.

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, the local taxes rose the most from 91.2m to 102.3m in 2018.

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had equivalent figures

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both years. In terms of how

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money was spent,

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salaries had the biggest slice of the two pies with 75% and 69% respectively.

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, the technology sector slightly increased from 8% to 14% in 2018,

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, it represented the lowest fraction of the two pies. The building and transport sector

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remained constant at 17% in the same aforementioned years.