The pie charts below show the devices people in the age 18 to 25 age group used to watch TV in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The charts illustrate various gadgets which were used by Canadians of the age from 18 to 25 to watch TV in 2009 and 2019. It can be seen that the results are more balanced and diverse in 2019.
The most obvious change during the period of observation is a sharp reduction of people utilizing traditional television, from 34% to only 4% in 2019. Apart from the conventional TV decrease, both laptops and desktop computers have lost popularity amongst the age group during the decade, by 8% and 6% respectively.
On the other side, other items
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mobile phones became slightly more popular, from 15% in 2009 to 26% in 2019, the flat-screen TVs and tablet percentages have drastically increased. The first device gained 19% throughout the decade, and the last
- 14%.
In conclusion, I can emphasise that people`s choices in 2019 became more multifold.Submitted by n.chubukina21 on
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