The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The line graph below demonstrates the
number
of people visiting three different places in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The number
of tourists visiting the mountains and the coast increased, while
the number
of visitors
to the lakes plummeted after 2002.
In 1987, the figure for visitors
to the coast declined until 1992, from 40 thousand
to 35 thousand
. However
, after that, the number
increased over the next 19 years.
In 1987, the number
of visitors
to the lakes started growing from 10 thousand
to 40 thousand
until 1997, and then
rapidly rose to 75 thousand
tourists in 2002.
Visitors
to the mountains started increasing in 1987 30
Change preposition
to 30
thousand
and stayed the same from 20 thousand
to 7, and the line between 1997 and 2002. In 2002, the number
rose slightly, and in 2007, the number
of visitors
reached 35 thousand
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