The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The line graph below demonstrates the
number
of people visiting three different places in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The Use synonyms
number
of tourists visiting the mountains and the coast increased, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the lakes plummeted after 2002.
In 1987, the figure for Use synonyms
visitors
to the coast declined until 1992, from 40 Use synonyms
thousand
to 35 Use synonyms
thousand
. Use synonyms
However
, after that, the Linking Words
number
increased over the next 19 years.
In 1987, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the lakes started growing from 10 Use synonyms
thousand
to 40 Use synonyms
thousand
until 1997, and Use synonyms
then
rapidly rose to 75 Linking Words
thousand
tourists in 2002.
Use synonyms
Visitors
to the mountains started increasing in 1987 Use synonyms
30
Change preposition
to 30
thousand
and stayed the same from 20 Use synonyms
thousand
to 7, and the line between 1997 and 2002. In 2002, the Use synonyms
number
rose slightly, and in 2007, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
reached 35 Use synonyms
thousand
.Use synonyms
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