The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Sweden showed one of the most significant drops in carbon
emissions
, especially after 1977. This
reduction might be because Sweden focused on cleaner energy sources and protecting the environment. The United Kingdom also
reduced its emissions
, but more slowly. Starting at 11 metric tonnes, it decreased to 9 by 2007. Possibly because of actions against pollution and efforts to improve air quality.
On the other hand
, Italy and Portugal had rising emissions
. Italy’s emissions
increased steadily, from 4 to 7 metric tonnes, because the country grew its industries and used more fossil fuels. Portugal, started
with the lowest Correct pronoun usage
which started
emissions
at 1 metric tonne, had the
fast rise and reached almost 5 metric tonnes by 2007. Correct article usage
a
This
rise represents industrial growth and the need for better environmental actions in these countries.Submitted by nurymbetova.aray on
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