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The first impression you have of a person is the best way to judge a person. Do you agree?

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People find out the best way of Judging is by their initial impression. I agree with
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 mindset These days
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 advertising and social media like Instagram people pay more attention
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 their appearance to impress their colleagues or people. In
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 you may encounter the best version of everyone with
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 suit and behavior.
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, most of them do not have
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 attitude with their closest relatives. Another reason is exactly the other side of it. When you meet someone with an inappropriate appearance, there might be many reasons behind it.
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, on our first day at high school, when we saw our teacher, he was not in a good mood and had not even chosen the best clothes.
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, a few hours later, we learned that his mother had passed away the night before.
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, some believe that
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 feeling can give you some information about them. In meetings or in dating, having the best first impression can enhance
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 performance and your chances.
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, they can guess their lifestyle and personality and completely judge them.
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 it might
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work in some situations, it could
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 bring so many misunderstood at
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latter
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 times.
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, judgment at
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 point is not reliable and it takes time. In conclusion, I believe that we cannot see their true nature at first glance, neither those who behave well nor those who do not. So, judging them
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 us to build a wrong visual
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 them in our minds.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • misleading
  • stereotyping
  • assumptions
  • incomplete information
  • non-verbal cues
  • subjective
  • inaccuracies
  • personal biases
  • cultural differences
  • yardstick for judgements
  • networking events
  • open-mindedness
  • subsequent interactions
  • psychological concept
  • 'thin slices'
  • valuable insights
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