The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
The pie diagrams illustrate the amount of money invested in different areas by a local government in 2010 and 1015.
Overall
, the distribution of the between both years is similar as the percentages slightly variated.
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Firstly
, it is shown that pensions and Linking Words
other
stayed in the same proportion, 19% and 1%, respectively. As Fix the agreement mistake
others
it
can be appreciated from the figures, the expenses going to education and defence droppedCorrect pronoun usage
apply
3
%; Change preposition
by 3
whereas
welfare and interest on borrowing grew by 5%. Linking Words
In addition
, healthcare insignificantly decreased from 21 to 20 per cent. Linking Words
Moreover
, the expenditure on transport went from 3 to 1%, Linking Words
as well as
culture and leisure Linking Words
that
decreased by half to 1% in 2015.
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apply
To sum up
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the government maintained their interests Linking Words
throughtout
the years because the changes were insignificant.Correct your spelling
throughout
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