Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but other people think they should be more realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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some people

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that young generations should follow their

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dreams

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dreams

and chase their dream

job

, others tend to believe that they should land

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that provides them security and is more suitable for them. In

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essay, I'll be discussing both views and will be presenting my opinion. Allowing the younger generation to pursue what they want to

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opens a window for new learning opportunities. As there is a phrase saying, "You won't learn unless you try".Giving them the space makes them independent and allows them to be

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a risk taker

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. They have the freedom to make their own decisions on what is good or bad for them. Most importantly, it enhances their skill to become a successful person in the future.

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: there are a lot of social media influencers who are

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millionaires

now. Their dream only came true when they decided to follow their dreams

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stick with social stigma. On the other side, people tend to choose stability and

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security. Many of the

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in our society goes by the rules and follow what everyone is doing. They graduate, find a stable

job

and work until they retire. It might certainly give them stability in life but it

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does not guarantee

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success in life. Most of them do like to be consistent with their

job

and life.

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willing to take any risks. They choose stability over creativity. In my opinion, pursuing what you dreamed of provides a

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gateway

for younger people to become more successful, independent and creative in the future.

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, it gives them enough time to learn from their mistakes and become a better version of themselves.