The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.
The bar graph compares the population of two different genders pursuing
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continuing education in Britain and whether they are doing it as full-timers or part-timers. These cover the years 1970 and 1990.
In general, there are more students attending part-time education compared to full-timers for both male and female genders. Remove the article
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Moreover
, the number of women shows an increasing trend over the period of time, for both casual and employed full-time, meanwhile, men's showing unusual trends.
Starting with, the male individuals, particularly the full-time employees, it shows that in 1970 there were only a few people studying while
working with around 150,000, then
after a year it increased to approximately 180,000, until it rose again to more than 200,000 in 1990. Hence
, for casual employees, since, they have more time to study, their figures are much higher. Firstly
, 1000,000 in 1970, but the following year 1980 it falls to around 900,000,
until it increases to more than 900,000 respectively in the Remove the comma
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period (1990).
By contrast
, females who are employed full-time are very minimal with just 3000, compared to those having casual contracts more than 600,000 in 1970. While
, in the next year the former increases to 200,000, the same with the latter to 800,000. Although
, employees full-time slightly rose to more than 200,000 respectively in 1990 the number of part-timers went up to less than 1200,000.Submitted by lauravictor.nz on
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