Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pulpils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a school uniform?

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Each school have its own rules in
dress
codes whether it is for employers or students and even visitors.
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negatives
of
both
. At
first,
having a strict
dress
code could be
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challenging
since not many enjoy being controlled especially when it comes to clothing, that alone can cause some
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between the parents who
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to satisfy their
kids
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demands and the administration who's trying to have a strict academic campus.
However
when it comes to the advantages of it there is actually a lot, yet mainly because not many students are able to afford
school appropriate
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clothing so having a united uniform for the whole campus will not only save them the trouble
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spending money but could
also
prevent them getting bullied by other immature
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children
for having repeated outfits like it is happening a lot nowadays. On the
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, some argue that having a simple
dress
code is much easier and better to deal with. It is understandable for some specific reasons
such
as being able to express their likings and style and many more.
Moreover
, it is
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the idea of modesty for
both
minors and adults in any type of educational area, as a lot of teachers speak about how students
dress
too carefree which is really inappropriate for their age and that could create disturbance in the classroom.
Thus
, as
both
sides of the argument can be
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excusable
, it is better for the mentors, learners
as well as
employees
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one specific uniform that could please each side without making issues. Another point of view is having a more firm
dress
code with punishments for those who don't follow it,
both
solutions should be considered.
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