Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Language
is the most basic and important component of a
country
.
Therefore
, when a person
move
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to a
country
which
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in which
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he/she
have
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has
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to speak a foreign
language
this
can
cause
some
dificulties
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difficulties
.
However
, some
people
are against
this
notion and they believe speaking a foreign
language
will not
make
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problems
. In
this
essay, I will analyse both views and present my own opinion. Having to speak a
language
except your native
language
will not
cause
social and practical
problems
. In
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the case
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case
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the case
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of
social
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a social
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problems
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problem
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problems
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, by using smartphones and other technologies
people
can communicate with each other even if they do not
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understand
undrestand
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understand
each
others
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other's
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language
perfectly.
Furthermore
, these days
due to
development
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of technology, learning
new
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a new
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language
is not as difficult as before and the process become simpler.
In contrast
, some
people
believe speaking a foreign
language
can
cause
issues. The way
which
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in which
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people
expressing
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express
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their personalities
while
speak
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speaking
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a foreign
language
can
have
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be
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significant difference
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significantly different
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from their
native's
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native
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language
.
For example
, humor
is vary
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varies
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from
country
to
country
so if a person
have
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has
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a good
sence
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sense
of humor, it would not mean that
this
person can maintain
this
charactrestic
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characteristic
in another
language
and
this
can lead to social
problems
.
Moreover
, being
master
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in a new
language
will
takes
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time so it is possible that local
people
do not
undrestand
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understand
your point because of your poor pronunciation.
This
lead
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leads
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to
missundrestanding
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misunderstanding
misunderstandings
and
cause
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causes
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problems
in society.
To conclude
, there are different views about how speaking a
foregin
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foreign
language
can
cause
issues but I believe having to speak in a different
language
than your native's can lead to
missundrestanding
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misunderstanding
misunderstandings
and disability to express
the
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true personality which shows my agreement with the argument.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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