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Writing Samples
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You have decided to resign from your work in order try a new field. Write a letter to your boss In your letter • Tell your boss of your decision and explain why you are leaving • Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving • Ask for a letter of reference

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Dear Mr. Sharma, My name is Suman working as a packer in your company in
packaging
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the packaging
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 department. I have taken
decision
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the decision
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 to resign from my position. The reason for leaving
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 is that I found another
job
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 in my field of study. I
was
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 searching for
this
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job
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from
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 a long time
ago
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. Today, I got
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job
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a job
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from
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at
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call
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 centre and I got
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job
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a job
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for
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in
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 office
administrative
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. There is no doubt that I have learnt various
thing
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things
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 being a packer. I discovered different packaging styles and
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, I learnt to work in
team
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a team
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. The weekly meeting every Tuesday taught me
variety
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 of topics about safety, which would be beneficial for in the future too.
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 working I made many
freinds
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friends
 in
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 company. I am feeling sad because making new
freinds
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friends
 is not
easy
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an easy
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 task. I am going to miss
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 work and people. It is my humble request to you to provide me
a
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reference letter. So, I can show it to
next
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my next
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job
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 if anyone asks. I am waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Suman
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