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Some students focus on a general range of school subjects,but others study only their favorite ones or those they are very good at.Discuss advantages of thw two methods and show your opinion.

There is Some
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 prefer to focus on a wide range of school
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 others prefer to spend more
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 studying their favourite
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 ,or the
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 that they skilled at.
This
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 essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages and I totally agree that
students
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 should focus on studying a specific subject. First of all ,
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 who focus on studying their special subject will improve their knowledge and be more skilled in a specific field.
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, they will spend their whole studying
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 expanding their knowledge and having more information on something they love to learn , so they going to improve more than when they study something mandatory.
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 , studies show that reading or studying something you are interested in will improve your score by 40% and the
students
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 may spend less
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 studying and less effort since they will find creative ways to study the curious topic.
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studying random modules without focusing on a special topic or field inquiry will decrease the quality of learning .
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 , the
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 who study a general range of
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 will distracted easily or stressed
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 the high pressure more than the focused one. As well they will not get a deep understanding and knowledge of each subject or topic.
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, studying a wide range of material does not ensure that those
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 will get high scores. In conclusion, studying specific
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 shows its effectiveness in improving the education output by spending less
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 and effort on the field they are interested in.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • well-rounded education
  • intellectual development
  • diverse fields
  • career paths
  • critical thinking
  • adaptability
  • dynamic job market
  • deeper expertise
  • specialized fields
  • academic performance
  • tailor their education
  • innovation and creativity
  • career aspirations
  • specialization
  • necessary skills
  • clear career goals
  • deep mastery
  • motivated learners
  • educational engagement
  • dynamic job requirements
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